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Laura's Bazaar, 03 by AxelMedellin Laura's Bazaar, 03 by AxelMedellin
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sandcastler Featured By Owner May 24, 2007
Cute series! I love your mermaid, Tuna!!
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner May 29, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot :D

she's one of my pet characters...
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:iconcrackedambitions:
CrackedAmbitions Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2007
That sure is one naughty water nymph...O_o

xD
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
You bet...
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:iconcrackedambitions:
CrackedAmbitions Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2007
Tell me.

Why do I have the urge to suddenly 'want the details'? xD
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
I think I'm in the wrong profession, I'm becoming a xxx movie director...
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:iconcrackedambitions:
CrackedAmbitions Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2007
xD -Pats back-

I'm here for ya pal. =3
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
:D
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:iconcrackedambitions:
CrackedAmbitions Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2007
So uhhh... -Shifty eyes-

When can we expect to see a fifth?

-Wants to know the details-
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
;) soon, soon
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tonysandoval Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2006
hey tienes buenas paginas,donde las publicas?
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
Gracias, mi buen... por el momento sólo en internet... pero como te habrá contado el Llarena, estamos aventando a todas partes a ver qué pega...
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pyroglyph Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2006  Professional General Artist
Ok, man, here's my editorial input, as you requested. :)

Panel 1, bubble 1, as you have it: "Every time I awake, I make myself deep and fundamental questions."

This should probably read: "Every time I wake up, I ask myself deep and fundamental questions."

"Awake", or "awaken", is technically ok in English, but in common American usage folks generally say "wake up" instead. "Awaken" is very formal, and I usually hear it only in poetry. And "make" should definitely change to "ask."

Panel 1, bubble 2: "Say... that hole in the ceiling, was there last night?"

Just a small correction, it should probably read "Say... that hole in the ceiling, was that there last night?"

Bubble 3 is fine, as is everything else until we get to Panel 4. The mermaid's dialog reads like this: "Big white shark's mating rituals. Is it normal I feel the urge of posing as bait?"

Recommended correction: "Mating rituals of the Great White Shark. Is it normal that I feel the urge to pose as bait?" or maybe "Great White Shark's mating rituals. Is it normal that I feel the urge to pose as bait?" The first would be a little better English, but it takes up more room on the panel. The second is ok, and its about the same length :)

Have I mentioned that I love this comic? I can totally see this as a professionally published book. Hell, I'd buy it! Great work, man.
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purplerebecca Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2006  Professional General Artist
Yup, what he said. *thumbs up*
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot, and thanks for helping with this...
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:iconpyroglyph:
pyroglyph Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2006  Professional General Artist
Absolutely my pleasure. :)
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Reaper8436247 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2006
Hey Nancy, I've got some proofreading experience and would be only too glad to volunteer my services.
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
Cool
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purplerebecca Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2006  Professional General Artist
Nancy-boy, is she going to be pants-less the entire comic? The girl needs to put on some shorts.

Great comic stuff going on. The art is fabo. XD You'll want to get some English proofreading help if you want to publish this, or do a long-running comic.

Tuna the mermaid is love.
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
Ok, I'll accept any proofreading... what did I mess up?
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Reaper8436247 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2006
Hey Nancy, I've done some proofreading andwould be only to happy to volunteer my services if needed.
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:iconclouded-mind:
Clouded-Mind Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2006
lol I just want more.
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
Me too...
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:iconclouded-mind:
Clouded-Mind Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2006
xD Then get to working. :heart:
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
will do
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:iconclouded-mind:
Clouded-Mind Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2006
Yeah!
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ebony66136 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2006
Her face in the last frame... :lmao:
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
Ain't she priceless? ;)
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Charles-Phoenix Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2006
oh my so it wasnt an absynth trip... as long as she didnt shag the toilet squid's brother or something its cool... this is turning way interesting
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks... I'll consider the shag bit
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JK-Comics Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hurray for Sushi! or Tuna? or maybe Tushi?

HURRAY FOR TUSHI!
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
NOW, that's a name... she'll be her cousin...
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:iconpyroglyph:
pyroglyph Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2006  Professional General Artist
She has a mermaid room mate in a fish tank??? Bwaaaa hahaha. Cracking me up. I love this comic. The artwork is wonderful. The dialog is hilarious, though the English is a little odd in places. I don't know if that matters to you or not. [grin] If it does, I'd be happy to help with a little proof-reading. :)
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
That would be cool, I was sure the english would be weird, not my native tongue, obviously...
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Viking-Heart Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2006  Student Digital Artist
jajaja esto se pone más extraño a cada segundo. xD Me encanta!
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
Gracias, man
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:iconowenshire:
OwenShire Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2006
posing as bait, lmao! Great, i want mooore!
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
:D thanks, man

BTW, I haven't forgotten the monkey king, I've just been pressed by time...
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:iconowenshire:
OwenShire Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2006
no worries, I can see you're really busy! Whenever you get the chance is fine, i'm in no rush to have it :D
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
cool
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:iconrobboman:
Robboman Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2006
Now it makes much more sense. I'm interested in the next ones. :)
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks, man
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:iconrfsindustries:
RFSIndustries Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2006
Hey man when is this gonna get printed, and when do I get my signed first edition :)
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
I'll save you one as soon as an editor takes the bait...
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:iconrfsindustries:
RFSIndustries Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2006
Alright, I'm gonna hold you to that XD
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:icontrifido:
Trifido Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2006
Esta historia se pone cada vez mas interesante :nod:
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
Muchas gracias
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Trifido Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2006
Por nada. Uno se pone ansioso esperando los proximos capitulos.
Me encanta la cantidad de personajes y la actitud hastiada de lo extraordinario que tiene la protagonista.
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:iconaxelmedellin:
AxelMedellin Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
Y aún no has visto nada...
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:iconhomiebear:
HomieBear Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2006
Ohh, the story develops . . . very good, I can't wait to read more.
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